Happy Wednesday! I’m finally feeling festive. Still don’t have our tree up, but the kids are preparing some holiday music, and I have a concert this weekend. Should be fun!
I’m slowing down in writing Minuet because Drumbeat is back from my publisher with some suggested edits. These weren’t demands; I asked for some suggestions because I felt the story was lacking. My publisher, being a fabulous human being, gave me great feedback. So instead of simply messing with it and getting more dissatisfied, I now have targeted things to work on. (I’m weird…this is my favorite part.)
I’m still sharing from Minuet, though, and this follows right from last week’s. Amelia asked if Sage was clear on the whole “leave Jamie alone” thing. Amelia still hasn’t shared the dirt she has on Sage, but she’s not above implementing the first part of her plan.
WIPmath: 12/6/2017 = (2-1) + 6 = 7 paragraphs, mostly dialog.
Sage swallowed visibly. “Fine. You have my word, I won’t contact Jamie again.”
“Oh, hell, no. Not good enough,” Mack said.
Amelia smiled meanly. “Get your new man out here.”
Too late. The beefcake who had spoken from the other room emerged, looked at the doorway, and raised an eyebrow. “Sage, what’s going on?”
“Nothing, baby. I’ll just be a sec.”
Amelia beckoned Mr. Muscles with one finger. Obediently, he came over. Well-trained puppy.
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