Happy Saturday! My sweet girl is 11 years old today. She got her first phone, and she’s been having fun calling us—even though we’re all inside the house. Meanwhile, my other kid showed what a great big brother he is by posting the nicest message for her on his brand-new Facebook page (he just turned 13 last Monday).
Here’s this week’s snippet, still from Nightsong. I missed last week because we were on vacation. This is the last bit of snark between Nate and Del; I’ll move on next week. This is a bit longer than 6 sentences—instead, it’s 6 exchanges of dialog.
“First of all,” Nate said, turning around again, “don’t call me bitchy. You know how I feel about that word. Second, my stress has nothing to do with my lack of sex, thank you very much.”
Del huffed. “I get that you’re a tortured artist and all, but I really do think you need to relieve all that pent-up tension.”
“Why? Are you offering?” Nate sneered at him.
“Oh, honey, you could not handle me,” Del replied, his voice smooth as butter. “I’m so not your type. Take it from me, though. You’ll feel a lot better once you blow off some steam. No one can go this long without it building up.”
“Not all of us are like you,” Nate snapped. At Del’s hurt expression, he relented. “I’m sorry. Listen, I know you mean well, but I don’t need a man to make my life better. What I need is to get my own shit together and focus on work. After the holiday production, I’ll have a break to deal with my personal relationship crises. Okay?”
“Okay, okay. I’ll leave you to it.” Del stretched, scratched his stomach, and flounced out of the room.
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P.T. Wyant
I like Nate’s maturity. Not all problems are solved by sex.
AM Leibowitz
For sure! They have very different philosophies on life.
K.S. Trenten
Is Del really in a position to be lecturing Nate? 🙂 Good to see Nate standing up to Del!
AM Leibowitz
LOL! No, he probably isn’t. But to be fair, he’ll be there for Nate when he needs him most, so we won’t go too rough on him. 😉
K.S. Trenten
Also a happy birthday to your daughter!
AM Leibowitz
Thanks! 🙂
Jackie Keswick
Oh, but I daresay he protests too much! 😉
AM Leibowitz
Ha! Well, he’s about to take Del’s advice—sort of—so that’s maybe accurate. 😉
Jana Denardo
Happy birthday to your daughter. I really like this exchange, highlights their different personalities well.
Laura Johnson
Love <3 Great dialogue!!!