Happy Saturday! I’m about to be off with my family to get our passports for a trip this spring. It’s cold, but I sense the sun making a half-hearted attempt at peeking out. Sadly, my kids’ school lock-in was canceled because they thought the weather would be bad (it’s not). The good news is, we have tickets to go see a friend in a show tonight instead.
I’m snipping again from Ashes & Alms, my short story in the Never Too Late anthology. I think I short-changed on a sentence, but it wouldn’t make sense to add the next one. So here is the opening paragraph for the story. No, it’s not really religious, despite the mention of missionaries. I tend to write about the complexities of belief/non-belief and identity.
Jo stared at the card in her hand. It was addressed under her pre-married name, Hodges. She hadn’t yet changed it back, even after two divorces, the most recent one less than a year old. The person had sent it to her eighty-three-year-old mother, who had laughed and forwarded it on. Even she recognized the sheer foolishness of anyone thinking Jo wanted to be reminded of her missionary summer.
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Kasia Bacon
Good opening!!!
AM Leibowitz
Thank you! 🙂
K.S. Trenten
Intriguing…
Jana Denardo
Intriguing opening. She sounds complex. I like that.
Laura Johnson
I absolutely loved this sweet tale of love and identity reclaimed!!!! <3 <3 <3
Jackie Keswick
I often wonder why women change their names after a divorce, though I suppose it depends on the circumstances of said divorce. The fact that she hasn’t seems to suggest she’s more comfortable in her current “incarnation” than she’d been before she married. Looking forward to seeing how this pans out.
Addison Albright
Intriguing beginning. So many questions making me want to know more.
Antonia Aquilante
Intriguing opening!