Happy Saturday! This afternoon, I get to go hear my older kid play some jazz! After several years of auditioning, he finally made it into the All County Jazz Band. He’s having a blast, and the conductor is amazing. I can’t wait to see the concert.
For today’s snippet, I’m going back in time to my first novel, Lower Education. The reason is that I’m giving away a copy later this week as part of a virtual egg hunt. Be sure to join the event on Facebook for an introduction to some amazing indie authors!
Here, we get a glimpse of our…uh…”hero,” Phin. His methods (and his ethics) often leave a bit to be desired.
Before leaving his room, [Phin] glanced at his reflection in the bathroom mirror. He smoothed his sandy blond hair, which he’d had cut and styled for the occasion, and gave himself a cheeky wink and a smirk. Surely he wouldn’t have any trouble finding someone to kiss up to. Or something more. That usually works better, he thought. There was always someone willing to provide dirt on a coworker, even in a school, for the right price.
Synopsis:
Phin Patterson is an educational consultant dissatisfied with his job and his life. On a mission to complete one last assignment before escaping his unfulfilling career and figure out what he wants, he accepts a commission from Donald Murdock at the New York State Education Department. He’s sent to evaluate a tiny school in New York’s Southern Tier, not far from the town where he grew up. Now his only goal is to get in, do his job, and get out before anyone from his past remembers him.
That turns out to be easier said than done. Dani Sloane, the sharp-witted administrative assistant to the principal, learns the truth about why Phin is really there. With the help of her friends, she sets out to unmask him and force the local board of education to stop the plans that could ruin their school. Discovering that her sometime-lover is an old business associate of Phin’s only complicates both the situation and their relationship.
Meanwhile, Phin, who has committed himself to keeping his emotional distance, can’t resist the charm of the town and its residents—especially the school psychologist, who turns out to be an old friend he hasn’t seen in over twenty years. While Dani works to take him down and save her school, Phin wrestles with learning how to do the right thing, including telling the truth to the man with whom he’s already falling in love.
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Darla M Sands
Wow! What an interesting character. I like it. Thank you for sharing. And Happy Writing!
Darla M Sands
Oh, and congratulations on your child’s accomplishment! You must be so proud. Enjoy the show!
AM Leibowitz
Thank you! I’m definitely feeling proud of my kiddo today. 🙂
AM Leibowitz
Ha! Yes, Phin is definitely interesting.
Cheryl Headford
Wow. That sounds interesting and complicated. I love a character with questionable morals. So much more fun
AM Leibowitz
Phin definitely has questionable morals, and yeah, he was really fun to write.
K.S. Trenten
Wonderful description giving us a real sense of what his character is like. Well done!
AM Leibowitz
Thanks! Phin’s one of those either love ’em or hate ’em kinds of people.
Dale Cameron Lowry
I love reading characters that aren’t completely likable. Phin sounds like he’d fit right into that category 🙂
AM Leibowitz
He is definitely not always likable, that’s for sure. 🙂
Charli
Love the sound of this! Thanks for sharing the snippet.
Hope your event goes well! <3
JL Merrow
Uh-oh – I see someone heading for a life lesson! 🙂
Laura Johnson
Phin is definitely someone I don’t know if I’d trust 😉
Brenda Murphy
What an intriguing snippet! And congratulations to your son 🙂
Aldrea
Great descriptions. Not sure I’d be willing to trust Phin, though.
And congrats to your kid.
josexpressions
I love the way this was written – well done! 🙂
Jana Denardo
Love the description of Phin (and congrats to your son).
Antonia Aquilante
Love the character description. Phin sounds interesting.
Addison Albright
I love how we learn as much, if not more, about who Phin is on the inside as we do how he looks from his glance in a mirror!