Welcome, Wednesday! This is going to be a short post because…well, there’s not much to tell.
The big thing this week is that Anthem is just about ready for beta reading. I lost one of my wonderful betas to the Real World of parenting and job responsibilities, which means I need a new one. If anyone is up to the job, I’m looking for something specific:
- Willing to read m/m content (including moderately descriptive sex)
- Able to take things slowly and co-read with another beta over several weeks
- Is able to make the necessary long-term commitment
- Willing to go chapter-by-chapter
- Can handle making comments on content as well as looking for glaring grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors
This is less in-depth than typical editing, but more than just “read through it and see if it makes sense and doesn’t suck.” Just leave me a note in the comments or send me a message through the contact form.
On to this week’s WIPpet. I’m still with Andre, but I realized there are an absolute ton of spoilers in this thing. Like, every chapter. So I’m only giving you a tiny snippet this week. This is quite possibly one of my favorite paragraphs in the whole novel.
WIPmath: 4/22 = 2 + 2 = 4 sentences.
Andre had known since he was four years old that he was going to be a daddy one day. His sisters had confiscated his “baby,” and he’d cried until Grams made them give it back. It wasn’t even a real baby doll—just a hand-me-down 1980s Black Barbie given to him by one of the women Grams worked with. He’d carted her around with him everywhere, wrapped up in a paper towel like a blanket, hollering at anyone who threatened to replace her with something they considered more appropriate for a little boy.
Side note: The Barbie in question was inspired by one I actually owned. One of my friends gave her to me for my birthday in first or second grade (she probably doesn’t even remember this). I loved that particular Barbie because she smelled really nice and she had the best shoes ever—they looked like Cinderella’s glass slippers.
We’d love to have you join the WIPpet party. Check out the other entries, and feel free to add your own. Just post a bit of your current work-in-progress, connect it to the date, and link up. Many thanks to K. L. Schwengel for providing this space for us. Happy reading and writing!